It's PUBLISHED!!! Finally. My latest creation, a first for me, meaning I did everything on this multimedia. The Flash, video, hd stills, audio, and even my first 'info graphic'.
It can be seen here. If you have been following the long, sporadic and secret journey of this project–previous post–then the wait is over. I hope it [...]
It's PUBLISHED!!! Finally. My latest creation, a first for me, meaning I did everything on this multimedia. The Flash, video, hd stills, audio, and even my first 'info graphic'.
It can be seen here. If you have been following the long, sporadic and secret journey of this project–previous post–then the wait is over. I hope it doesn't disappoint.
I am going to finish giving the details about how this project came together in another post. Why? Because I thought I would let you all take a look, then ask ?'s and give me some feedback, then I can answer any ?'s in the final wrap-up. I'm also very busy trying to put together the next tutorial on video compression.
tnxs for your time,
-r
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Richard,
First, congrats on getting the project “out the door,” I haven’t even looked it over in detail; however, I read the little “intro” on the main stage, clicked on the story link, and then clicked on the big gothic “M” in hopes of reading the full story…
But when I do this, all I get is the front page of the Merc; I can’t see anything about this rail story… is this a treasure hunt?
What am I missing?
they actually haven’t posted it yet, not till tomorrow morn, i just jump the gun a bit.
Shoulda known; occupational hazard of a night ow.
Very interesting way to tackle this type of topic. Less documentarian, more cinematographer.
I like the ‘Hillman Curtis’ treatment mixing text with the voices; I wonder if some of it may be too much simultaneous info for the viewer, however, and detract from the overall story-telling.
The videos are wonderful – this is exactly the sort of (well, one sort of) story-telling that comes next.
I’m gonna play it around my office for a bunch of well-confined tv reporters as a reminder of what you can do when you’re thinking and feeling.
Richard, very nicely done, I really like the cinematic approach you have taken. This subject was really right for it, makes it very interesting.
I do have one comment about the video, particularly the one about riding the Alameda rails. The narrators voice comes in too far into the piece, almost half way in, and is a bit jarring. When using narration in documentary, even if it is to be used very sparingly, it is very important to introduce the narrative voice early, even with only a few words. Just my two cents ;-)
I am very impressed with all you guys are doing, keep up the great work.
-Roger
Richard –
Highly inspirational!
The presentation is simple, clean, and effective. In my estimation, I don’t think the average viewer would have any difficulty with the treatment of text integrated with the video. Seems to serve as an appropriate underscore, if you will. One consideration, and this might be nitpicking, but if the rails truly are “red hot”, give the viewer one little added extra aesthetical reason to engage the show by changing the font color from white, to a red.
On a personal note, my first photographic excursions were made on my bicycle with a Pentax K1000, and a Pentax p30t from Atlas Ave. — just six blocks from the switching yards, and old turntable. So, your piece brings back some fond memories!
Nice work!
- Andrew
Just curious, how does your paper tell people to go see your work online? Here, we put a little “refer” note with the story in the paper telling people to go online for video or audio, whatever it is.
What note was included in your paper for this project?
Great work.
Where’s the web statistics?
Do y’all just go by y’alls server stats?
I believe Analytics is free:
http://www.google.com/analytics
Used to cost about $200 dollars a month as
urchin before Google bought it and made it free.
It’s real cool stuff.
You can track flash buttons as separate webpages so you know how long people looked at each part of your flash site.
And it helps your Google ranking.
It’s very well done. Very artistic too, but effective artistic if you know what I mean.
I envy the size your video runs and how well it survives being compressed. Video needs to be geared only toward broadband users. Not the 2 guys that still have dial up. Great quality as have others been on your papers web site.
Again it looks super and gets me to rethink the more literal approaches I take.
Still riding the crest of a wave…the images are stunning. The use of b/w interview slows you down and takes you back in time. Very rich posting.
I just started visiting “multimediashooter.com” and find everyone’s efforts here extraordinary. And as someone who is going full speed ahead in multimedia, I find this site very helpful and inspiring.
“Red Hot Rails” is a wonderful creative example of what we can now do to tell stories. I enjoyed watching the videos immensely. Congrats!
Love the video “Take a Ride on the Alameda Corridor”, great editing, great use of B-roll and focus. I really like the approach.
Here’s my critique:
Interface/Design: Don’t forget to set the title in your html:) I would make the title “Red Hot Rails” clickable to take you back to the main splash. Transitions from one section to the next always go from section 1 to the section you clicked on.
Audio:Watch PoPPing your Ps. Hold the mic below the mouth of your subject not in front.
Great job, love your artistic nature.
P pops. That is one thing that popped(pun intended) out at me. Nice work.
Fabulous job, Richard (and team).
My only criticism is a piddly one. The home page has a sentence at the bottom of the intro text that reads, “Read the entire story by clicking on the link above.” But there are many links above and no “one” link that does the job. So an improved approach might be to use text something like, “Use the links above to begin exploring this story.”
Also, what do you think about making the home page itself clickable and have it take you into the Video section as a default (or whatever section you think is most popular or the best place to begin).
I read the story in the Merc when it came out and I liked it there very much. Then I forgot to go and look for it online. Doh!!!
This is my first time on MultimediaShooter too. What a resource! So much fantastic content. How’s a guy supposed to get any work done?
Thanks.
Craig